Fan Fiction story

[blondeanglskate]

This is my first fan fiction story and I'm just making it up as I go along ... I'm sure it wont be as good as Forevermkfan's but here goes! :D please tell me what you think.

Setting: March 2003
Place: Washington D.C.

Chapter 1
It was late in the morning on Friday March 28, the day of the ladies short program at Worlds. Sasha, Michelle, and Sarah were out shoping in a local mall. They were all looking through aisles of clothes, Sarah in the womens section giggling seeing Sasha and Michelle trying to find something cute that would fit them in the Petite section. All of them were searching desperatly for something to where to the dinner party for all the skaters after the ladies competition later that night.

Sasha spotted a gorgeus short black dress with pink rhinstone sequences. "Omg," Sasha squeeked jumping up and down, "this dress is perfect!!"

Michelle and Sarah agreed still searching for something for themselves to wear. Michelle eyed a white dress that went down to around her knees, it had blue flower sequences and green leaves.

Sarah finally found a dress she liked that was long and light blue with ruffles around the trimming. They all went to the cashregisters to pay each of them getting a 25% discount of the price for being so famous and choosing their store to shop in.

They left the mall and headed back to the hotel where they were all staying, the Grand Hyatt. They walked into the hotel waved and smiled to the friendly waitresses in the hotel cafe and headed to the elevator. They all got of on the third floor where they had three of the best rooms in the hotel all next to eachother.

Each of them walked to their doors and opened them with their hotel keys. As all three doors opened at almost the exact same time they all screamed, "OMG what happened to all my stuff!"

[Always_Sasha]

Oh no! Now I have to wait impatiently for two good stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:rolleyes: *sigh* lol It's good! :D:lol:

[sk8ing_lady2001]

I love it, Sonia. That is so far, so good. :) :lol:

[blondeanglskate]

yay Angie and Kiki read my story :D

[forevermkfan]

LOL. Glad I inspired you Sonia. *proud/snooty look* LOL! I like it so far! Keep writing lol. Yea, now you have to stories to wait on, lol! :p

[Sashastar917]

Yeah, iz cute, but you really have to add more.;)

[sk8ing_lady2001]

Sashastar917, I agree. That would be more fun. :D

[icesk8rchiq]

i like it so far!!:p :D

[blondeanglskate]

Here’s the next chapter sorry it took so long ... I though this thread was deleted so I didn’t add anything … lol … been swamped with stuff lately as well... and this is a little weird lets just say my minds a bit messed up right now, a strange book, and wacked tv show! lol

Chapter 2
Everything in Sasha's room had been thrown around, suitcase open with all her clothes all over the floor. Some of her clothes had been taken, others ripped up. Her white skating dress for her short program competition that night was on the floor, torn up in several pieces. Sasha finally found her skates under a pile of torn clothes, the skate boots were still in good condition, but whoever had torn her clothes had stolen her blades! Sasha found a small note on a plain sheet of white paper folded on her hotel bed, which had not been touched. She opened the letter and read it to herself, becoming more frightened then ever.

Sasha ran out of her room and to Michelle's door. Michelle was just about to go get Sasha or Sarah. Michelle's room had been left the exact same way as Sasha's, clothes and her short program dress town up, blades stolen, and the same note sitting on her bed.

Michelle and Sasha both ran to Sarah's room to find that her room was also left exactly the same. All three of them became extremely frightened as they all read the note out loud trying to make sense of it. "You think you are so wonderful, adored by so many fans and of course the media. But this will no longer happen. You will loose the competition tonight. You will let the Russians and the Japanese beat you. If you come any higher then second place it will be over for you. Remember what is missing and you can figure out what I will do."

Sarah was now shaking to frightened to move. Sasha wasn’t much better; she was biting her nails, which she never did, because she was so nervous. She almost fainted but Michelle caught her though she too was in shock. None of them knew what to do, they had to get ready for the short program, practice began in an hour, but none of them had anything to wear, and they need new blades. They were also scared because if they did not loose they were afraid they would get their throats cut with their skate blades. None of them wanted to loose though, each of them was so excited coming here, Sasha and Sarah both wanting to get their first Worlds gold medal, and Michelle wanting to get her fifth Worlds gold medal. Each of them wondered 'who would do this to us, who could possibly want to win so bad they would threaten us?'

ok i just found that i wrote this chapter a while ago and never posted it ... i will try to post chapter 3 and possibly 4 before i leave saturday .. tell me if you think its messed or not... and if you want more

[sashafanforever]

This is sooooo good! I can't wait to read more!

[blondeanglskate]

thanks stephanie!!

[*Alyssa*]

That is a really good story so far! I can't wait to read more!!:D

[blondeanglskate]

thanks alyssa!! ill post chapter 3 tommarro.

[Sashastar917]

Cool story girl! ;)

[a-clav]

It's a really good story :)!!! Can't wait till you post the next chapter!!! Good job with the story:D

~Ashley

[blondeanglskate]

Chapter 3
The three of them stood there in shock for what seemed like forever, though it was really on about ten minutes. Then Michelle finally said something, it was as simple as “We have to go get new dresses and blades if we are going to compete at all, right now!” The three of them grabbed their purses and headed down the elevator. They decided to tell the police officer they saw in the main hall what had happened to their rooms. He was amazed anyone would do such a thing. They gave him the notes each of them received and he said “I’ll get a investigation going on this right away, we’ll have this solved as soon as possible.” The girls thanked him and headed off down the street to a nearby skate shop.

An extremely friendly sales person who couldn’t help but ask for their autographs greeted them. Sasha then asked, “Do you have any Gold Seal blades in stock?” The sales lady quickly went and found her a pair of Gold Seal blades that were just the right size. She then went off to find Sarah and Michelle their blades and luckily had the same luck with finding them that she had with Sasha’s. Sarah started to wonder around the store looking for a dress she might like and Michelle and Sasha quickly followed. They tried not to spend to long looking for a great dress because their practice started in a half hour. Plus they usually spent a thousand dollars at least on their dresses so they tried to remember they wouldn’t be as nice as the ones the usually wore.

Michelle decided on one first, it was a simple red dress with some silver sequences around the waist line, but it still wasn’t anything special and cost less then one hundred dollars. Sarah was the next to pick out a dress, it was a long sleeve blue dress with open with illusion fabric, but still it was nothing fancy and also cost less then one hundred dollars. Sasha took a bit longer, she must have been crawling through racks or something but finally she found what must have been the best dress in the store, it was a light blue dress that was low cut in the back and had a triangular cut in the front, the lining was filled with tons of silver sequences and the sequences went down the front of the dress as well, it was beautiful, defiantly the best dress in the store and yet it was under two hundred dollars.

The girls paid for their dresses and left the store. The hopped into a cab and were rushed to the arena. Practice started in less then five minutes. When they arrived they went to go find their coaches. Each of them told their coaches what had happened to their stuff, the coaches seemed even more surprised then they had. They showed them their new dresses and then asked them to help attach their blades. Their practices went well but they most defiantly could have been better. As they waited for an hour backstage before the event started a policeman who came, not the same one they had first spoken to though. He told them that the investigation was underway but no fingerprints were on the notes they had left on their bed so it would take more time to track down the person who did it. They asked the police man to keep them informed and then started to talk with their coaches about what they should do. Everyone agreed that they should do their best in the short program and if the police still hadn’t found the person by the long programs in two days they would just lose that. Still scared they sat in silence for the half hour they had left before the short programs started. Sasha listened to music to “cool down.” Sarah and Michele stretched in silence, trying to get into their “zone.”

[sp_bsfan4ever]

That is really good Sonia:D

[Sashastar917]

Keep it up Sonia! I like it! :D

[Always_Sasha]

I can't wait to read more :D

[*Alyssa*]

That is so good, Sonia! I want more!:D

[Dancin'Queen89]

Please write more! I love it :D!

[sk8&sashafan]

it's great! keep up the good work!:)

[GlitterTwist]

Sonia-

no offence but it is very unrealistic. You couldn't just buy new skates, you have to break them in and everything first and if this really happened the police wouldn't just be like "I'll get an investigation started" the event would probably be postponed and Sasha, Sarah, and Michelle would probably be kept safe in the hotel or somewhere locked up......they wouldn't be allowed to wander in the streets especially with all of them together

[sashaskates]

Its a good story - and you don't need to break in blades so that part is realistic. Keep writing, and let us know what happens at the end!

[Calidreamer119]

no offence but it is very unrealistic. You couldn't just buy new skates, you have to break them in and everything first and if this really happened the police wouldn't just be like "I'll get an investigation started" the event would probably be postponed and Sasha, Sarah, and Michelle would probably be kept safe in the hotel or somewhere locked up......they wouldn't be allowed to wander in the streets especially with all of them toget

It probably would've been more of a big deal with the police and everything, but so what. This is a fan fic story and it doesn't have to be that realistic. Plus, she said it was he first fan fic stroy give Sonia a break! :) Its a really good story so far Sonia!! Please keep writing!

[Sashastar917]

Yeah. C'mon Sonia, I want to read more! :D

[blondeanglskate]

now let me explain .. my first fan fic story ... did forget about it again im trying to find the rest of it ill post it when i do ... and i hate reality ... so i write very unrealisticly! :D

[sk8&sashafan]

Originally posted by blondeanglskate
now let me explain .. my first fan fic story ... did forget about it again im trying to find the rest of it ill post it when i do ... and i hate reality ... so i write very unrealisticly! :D

lol. you can write however you want, it's your story. i really like it!:D

[Calidreamer119]

I like it a lot too! I hope you find the rest of your story soon! I can't wait to read more!!! :)

[GlitterTwist]

sry, I really like ur story!

[Sashastar917]

Yeah, me too! :D